Sunday, October 17, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

This is a piece that is currently being considered by a publisher.  It's from my paranormal series.  I am very excited about it.
“Which of me do I choose?”  Chloe pressed her soft hand against the cool window.  The condensation outlined her hand; small bursts of coloured liquid framed the window.  She caught a glimpse of her reflection and gasped.  Swirls of energy danced together in the large space between them, just like she had seen before in her dreams.

13 comments:

  1. Oooo, very intriguing! Love the imagery.

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  2. Very intriguing. Good luck with the publisher!

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  3. I really love you choice of words in this snippet.

    Hopefully the publisher will pick it up. :)

    L

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  4. Thought from the tweet that the dilemma was going to be which of two men. So this is a pleasant surprise. Very intriguing. Good luck with the submission.

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  5. I love it.. I wanna know more!

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  6. Would that we could all chose who to show to the public. Nice outtake

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  7. Love the unknown suspense. It's a great excerpt- please continue next week

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  8. Good luck with the publisher. You have such vivid phrasing here. I'd like to know more about her dreams.

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  9. Very intriguing excerpt. I want to read more. Good luck w/ your submission.

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  10. Beautiful description! I can really see it!

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  11. Very interesting. I thought I commented on this earlier but I don't see it! From your first Tweet, I thought the choice was going to be two men. So this is surprising, different and intriguing! Which will she choose?

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