Sunday, January 23, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

I am so excited because I have made so much progress with Book 2 of Wicked Kisses!  You don't know how busy my schedule has been, but my characters will not leave me alone.  So, I present you a piece of my WIP from S. Delight!


Small tendrils of the fire flirted with the edges of her innocent flesh, but hid away into the shroud of her body.   Basilio wanted to draw out the firesprite within her, but she kept herself under control.  He leaned in to kiss her, but she turned her face way.  The hope in him dimmed a bit, but he placed his hand behind her head, grabbed a fistful of hair and held her in place.  A second attempt and he planted his lips against her succulent lips.  The sweet taste of her mouth lined his palate and awakened the very core of his loins. 

18 comments:

  1. I'm sure that is one "hot" kiss. Great excerpt!

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  2. You had me when his hand fisted in her hair. LOVE that! :)

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  3. Great description into their kiss- love the way he "planted" onto her succulent lips- yup. love these scenes

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  4. I'd say this was hot but that would be redundant! Great snippet

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  5. Hot. Love that pic too. It's perfect for this excerpt.

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  6. A firesprite--so cool! I sure hope you share more about her.

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  7. Yes indeed! That's a great kiss!

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  8. Great snippet!! I can't wait to read more next week. I'm hooked!

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  9. "The sweet taste of her mouth lined his palate and awakened the very core of his loins. " That is HOT!

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  10. Cool! Or I should say hot!

    I guess he isn't worried about getting burned. lol

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  11. nice description on the firesprite within, yes I bet that's one hot scene as it continues.

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  12. Now if every kiss could be like that! Loved your snippet girl. :)

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  13. Great six. Glad he was willing to try again.

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