Sunday, November 7, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

A piece from my novel being considered:
Dr. de Cole set down his leather bag and came further into the room.  Chloe studied his features, trying to match up every detail about him.  Dr. de Cole’s dark grey eyes turned a shade lighter, and a sudden twinge of sexual energy rushed between them.  The colour of his pale skin faded into a pinkish hue; a stark contrast from the crisp black slacks and dark green button up shirt.  Chloe pulled herself together and chided herself for forgetting her manners.  “It’s nice to meet you...”

8 comments:

  1. ooo, I could feel that spark. Excellent snippet.

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  2. Chloe seems to have plans for the good doctor! ;)

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  3. Like the "sudden twinge of sexual energy rushed between them". Very emotive.

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  4. Nice to meet you, Dr. de Cole!

    (Waiting to see that sizzling bedside manner!)

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  5. Your detail is great! Sexual energy is sexy!

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  6. I like how you show both characters being effected by the sexual energy.

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