Sunday, November 28, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday


Gardenia perfume lined the surface of her skin.  My lips touched the edge of her plush pink lips.  She tried to writhe free, but my strength overpowered her small frame.  I pulled her closer. My blood ran hot, overpowering my rational mind as I pressed my groin against her silky flesh. I murmured, “Do you know what you do to me?” 
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 28, 2010 at 8:04 AM

    Ooooo, very hot! Great, vivid descriptions.

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  2. Marsha A. MooreNovember 28, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    Love how her femininity turned him on. Great sample.

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  3. Jessica E. SubjectNovember 28, 2010 at 10:51 AM

    I can guess what she does to him. ;)

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  4. AnonymousNovember 28, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    Nice. Can't wait to read what happens next week!

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  5. Marie DeesNovember 28, 2010 at 2:53 PM

    If she doesn't know, she's probably about to find out.

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  6. D CarneyNovember 28, 2010 at 3:43 PM

    Hmm...I think she might have an idea. ;)

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  7. Jayel KayeNovember 28, 2010 at 3:44 PM

    If she doesn't know, she will soon, I think! nice snippet

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  8. Christa PaigeNovember 28, 2010 at 3:57 PM

    What I want to know is if he is going to show her exactly what is is she does to him, in many hot sensual ways.

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  9. Lex ValentineNovember 28, 2010 at 9:03 PM

    He's sexy. Great tension!

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  10. UnknownNovember 28, 2010 at 10:46 PM

    I like the POV on this. Very hot : )

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  11. Hailey EdwardsNovember 29, 2010 at 6:11 AM

    Delicious. I'm sure she'll find out soon enough.

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  12. Author Leanne DyckNovember 29, 2010 at 10:51 AM

    HOT! Thank you for sharing this piece. More, please.

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